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Aug 23 15 8:28 AM

Hassarius wrote:
I just finished these, I have never done any sprites before so I am not sure if they are okay or not and I am open to sugestions on how I may improve them. I can't seem to add the image to my post, it said it was in it but it did not show up, so I will have to upload it via media fire. https://www.mediafire.com/?ah4m71ppgjs38m5

 

The sprite is nice, while we can use it as such it could be better to make it dynamic if you can,
I explained things here a bit under the "The sprite" part: http://sb2revival.lefora.com/reply/46987882/Making-a-new-girl#reply-46987882
Let me know if anything wasn't clear.

As for way to improve it (and i premise that i'm no artist, so take my advice with a pinch of salt), the color looks too uniform, try shading the edges a bit more, but otherwise very nice sprite.

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Aug 24 15 4:14 PM

Hassarius wrote:
 

I just finished these, I have never done any sprites before so I am not sure if they are okay or not and I am open to sugestions on how I may improve them. I can't seem to add the image to my post, it said it was in it but it did not show up, so I will have to upload it via media fire. https://www.mediafire.com/?ah4m71ppgjs38m5

As lilli said, a bit more shading on the hair and the dress and it will be great.

to make it ever better for us, it would help if you make a version with the nude girl and all the clothes as separate files ( one for shoes, one for the gress, etc)   that way the sprite can be dynamic in game and change visuals as equipment change ^^
 

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Dec 22 16 7:28 AM

New Char Sprites for Game

http://www.mediafire.com/view/7pvug0mbxzeyd6a/Kanade_Tachibana_Charset.png
Im making some Sprites for a few chars i have in my  personal save of the game

for most i already have the pictures and stat.xml done too

The Picture above is a Charset of Kanade Tachibana from Angel Beats!

please tell me if it looks good  and when i have done a few  i will post a link  with the download for the sprites with pictures and everything i have done


Pictures are already in the size needed

wait for more good news from me :D

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black imperator

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Dec 22 16 8:18 AM

very nice, if i had one comment, the ponytail looks a bit weird on the back sprite, but it's not a big issue.

Is it done using our templates ? do you have the dynamic version of it ( clothes as separate sprites) ?

don't hesitate to come to the chat if you want more feedback from other people, or if you have questions about dynamic sprites. http://sb2revival.chatango.com/

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Dec 22 16 8:26 AM

yes i used the templates i got from here and have  the clothes as seperate too
 when i collected a few i will link a download here with everything i got
atm i have a list off about 40 chars i need to make but dont know what sprites you especially need so would be good if you have a list of  sprites you want  so that i can help  with your great game(im a big fan XD)

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Dec 22 16 8:48 AM

i need to see with the others what are the most urgent ones, in the meantime, any girl that have enough pics is valid, (along with updating some of the old sprites to our current templates with dynamic version).

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